Board Thread:UFSW Discussion/@comment-23785492-20150816014510/@comment-4105222-20150826231936

Jamie141 wrote:

OMFG KING KP YES <3 So much awesomeness. <3

Alright alright. About the place in the country thing if I'm honest it doesn't really actually matter, unlike some countries these days in the real world, in my world every part of the country is pretty much the same with the same accents, etc. I was mainly looking for like either you to make up a city/town name or let me do it. xD

If there is any affiliations don't forget to mention that. ;D

Personality and backstory seems to be alright. I assume by the "fleeing the country you mean from her origin country to America? I mean you have her listed as "Israeli-American" so I thought she may be from there, its fine whichever though, as long as she is in america at the story start. xD

The relationships are alright, something I can work with when I do the profile along with the help of the backstory. Although I will say if you would like to add more as your personal imput then feel free to do so. <3

The extra details are pretty good so far as well. Although maybe you could give a little expansion on the fears she hasn't got over and, I feel stupid for asking this, but I assume due to the cam model thing the "adult business" you mention is like maybe sexual things or is just modeling kinda business?

Its a awesome character audition so far though. I'm loving her. <3 You'll have to let me know when you've fully added everything you want to and don't worry about the grammar, i'm not bothered by it. <3 xD

WELP, I give up. I've been trying to add to my char submit for the past hour but the tab keeps refreshing, so I've lost my progress about twice now. :( So I'm just going to edit this again later, and answer your questions now.

About the country thing, she just moved to a different state, yes. I wanted her to originate from Colorado.

As for the "cam modeling" thing, yeah it's just cam work, nothing sexual. Although she was very close to that if not for Cressida's intervention.

Her fears, as I've kept trying to list earlier, are as follows:
 * Spilled blood/gore
 * Being kidnapped/human trafficking
 * Men of higher power who disparage women/others
 * Huge-scale terrorist acts
 * And possibly more. These are fears that root from her true self, as Melissa is formerly an innocent, kind soul who was forced to toughen up from her choices. She is still working through these fears, and the more she is exposed to these things the more she will hesitate. Cressida's been the only one to put her at ease so far.

I'm going to add these to the submission later on, and definitely add more detail to other areas. Sorry for slacking on this, I'm not really home and therefore am not at my computer. :[