Talk:Beyond The Dead/Issue 1/@comment-1107423-20130814032019

Holy shit, the detail is incomparable between the rewrite and the new one. I really don't know what else to say, you followed the same basic beats and plot (obviously you don't wanna change too much in regards to the story since you're already so many issues in!) but upping the quality was a good move. I can see the difference already, so much more detailed and well-written. Good shit, Warfare!