Talk:Life Will End/Chapter 6/@comment-23785492-20140110045803

Well....prepare for a long ass comment and most importantly SPOILLERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Any idiot still reading now, STOP, unless if you've read the issue already or you are Mage and wrote the issue. :P

Alright i'll do it scene by scene since I cant figure where to start (like I said on chat :P)

But first off I will say this, this issue was amazing, best out of all your issues and i'll probs surprise you by saying this but in my opinion this chapter puts the story as one of my top favourites I've read, right next to DF (shh don't tell Bait :P)

The reason why I liked this chapter so much is mainly the flash backs, they were pretty amazingly done and they really made this chapter awesome so congrats on them. (claps x 100)

Ok, ok scene by scene bit now....

Well, first scene honestly I got to get this straight, so they were the parents of Vlad right? :S if they were that was pretty interesting to put it there.

Now honestly I don't know what to say about this scene, even Riley in my series isn't as bad as this...this was just mental, I don't even think that can describe this...I just don't know what to say but as I just said even Riley would turn his nose up at the thought of doing that to someone and he's meant to be a complete sicko.

Alright i'll say this one all together instead of seperating it lol.

Ok all the way through the group trying to escape and going down one by one was sad, shocking and tense. Zach just went mad, Jeff was fucking crazy but he kinda made up for it in the end and Daisy was the poor casualty. :( and then right at the end Vlad and Melanie leaving Mick? damn but I suppose the man is kinda losing it. I also liked how you left his fate unknown, like did he shoot the infected or himself and if you never have him appear again it also leaves it up to the readers to decide so good job on that.

Now i'll finish reviewing the flashbacks....

Next flashback, I'm guessing that was Daisy as a baby? if it was nice linking it there I like that idea. ;P

The Daisy and Jeff one was super good, defiantly since you done it just before Daisy's death which was kinda shocking by the way. :s and sat at the whole trying to form words bit, I admit a tear did escape then....

Overall, issue was AMAZING and very well written, defiantly worth the wait and I cant wait to read your sequel. :P