Talk:Dead In The Street/Chapter 4/@comment-4105222-20130329101303

Yeah, so... this might just be the best chapter of this story I have read so far.

First of all, I never got to tell you how awesome it is to have frat boys as villains. It's something usually overlooked in zombie flicks (though, in all honesty, I have not seen very many). Their motives are believable, since... they're all a bunch of hungry dudes waiting for opportunity to strike. The addition of a queen makes it a little bit more twisted, and all the more scary. I felt the scene where the King beat their heads in with the baton. So psychotic. Glad they both got dealt with quickly. :D

I also wanted to mention that Fancy's name is growing quickly on me. Aside for her cool backstory, I really like her name for some reason. And boy, am I glad to see Wilson uphold his duties! The dude knows when to think straight in times of need. I find the dynamic with Jerome very interesting, as I'm sure it'll present some sort of conflict later on. I, for one, look forward to Wilson finding his own judgement, and leading the group with it.

It's also so awesome to see that not all of the people in the group are happy being in it. Sally really shows it well. Still, judging from what I've read, she might not be able to do much. She might be the catalyst to the group's discordance, or something much worse... I'd like to see the suspense unfold for that.

You did great in this issue! Probably because of the action on it. Well, it was pulled off pretty well. The details really made me feel like I was seeing it in my own eyes. Keep up and at 'em.