Talk:Writing Contest 2/JackTheChineseMonkey/@comment-8483090-20141108181224

Yo, yo. Sorry for the late comment. I read this awhile ago but forgot to comment, so here we go.

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Wow, man. You really outdid yourself here. Like, really did. I appreciate how you wrote it in first person, as it gave us a better look inside Logan's head, and it worked out for the best. One thing I like to point out is how you wrote the issue, like you said, as like a pilot episode. That is intresting, and like you also said, it did bring questions into my head. Sure, they are neva gonna be answered, but I love that they won't. It keeps me guessing about the group Logan mentioned and his fate with the newbies at the end. You, also, nailed Logan's character completely, from his nightmares, to him helping others out and all. I also loved the small scene with the telephone that didn't work :P

You did great here and I appreciate the effort you put into it. Great job man!