Talk:Dead Frontier/Issue 1/@comment-1107423-20130210010521

This is the first story I've decided to read on the site, the first of many I hope.

Overall, I'm really impressed. You really know how to build suspense. Your description is vivid and the character's actions are very realistic. The way Cole panics about potentially being arrested was a nice touch, you have a good grasp on your characters and I'm excited to read on. :D