Talk:A Long Road to Fortune/Issue 30/@comment-4105222-20140210062117

Finally finished issue 30! What I thought was going to be a full focus on the missing friends of Ashton turned out to be so much more than what I expected.... another issue that effectively ends a volume.

Saying that, you've shown sufficiently enough Fausto and Yvette's significance, with a little bit of Curly on the side. As much as Curly is supposed to annoy the crap out of me, I'll cut him a bit of slack.... I tend to be nice to characters on a text if I'm given a little time, and hearing about Curly a lot, that's plenty. But as you know, I am always rooting for the old guy in the background, so it was all about dat Principal Zarez. Naw, not really, I focused on Yvette and Fausto this time. :)

You're very quick to show the friction between this tall-ass third year and these two kids, err, Fausto actually, while you accompany it with some development here and there. Like the two kiddies, I'm gonna take it slow and watch as Fausto and Yvette friendzone each other to eternity. That isn't putting it nicely, is it... but yeah, they seem to have a nice little friendship going on, and I don't want that to move too fast. I remember reading Yvette was rich...? That little line she said about their families is clever, packs a lot of meaning, and left an impression on me. Are they really still alive? It's been two months, don't get your hopes up...

Then out of nowhere, Ashton arrives! Our little hero from last issue is upholding his role here. He's turned into one helluva badass here, jeez. Came a long way, Ashton. But I can see where it roots from. And no, it's not just Mr. Chet's words... it's that other night.

Action scenes aside, it's the aftermath that made me smile. That ending, the raw reaction we get from Liza was nothing but perfect. You do those too well that it makes me fanboy and go "aaaaaaaaaw". Always an amazing job in that regard PBR, and I really hope you keep that up.

PS: Paloma, my girl.... let's see where this story takes you.