Talk:Kingdom of Bones: Episode One/@comment-6293216-20160712011640

YO LIT MALI FINALLLLLY RELEASED SOMETHING??!!!?! WHAT IS THIS FUKING MADNESSSSSSSS YO

FIRST THINGS FIRST I GOTTA COMMEND YOU ON UR WRITING IMPROVEMENTS :3 FROM WHAT I REMEBER THE PAST KOB TO BE AND BTD/M, YOU REALLY IMPROVED A LOT AND IM SO PROUD OF U MAYNEEE

Obviously the first thing that strikes me is that opening flashback or dream sequence oR WHATEVER THAT WAS...like, yo, I was instantly hooked and interested in what it meant. Franco gonna steal a crown AND fuck a goddess like bruh what kinda tough-ass life u tryna live girl. That being said, I loved the interaction between Alessia and Franco in that shed -- their teasing of one another and confrontation was really well-written, and since you've said it, I gotta ask: yo when can we see Alessia in action with a sword?? you teased us with it but now i wanna see this girl bust some heads

AND OFC YO I RLLY LOVE ONDREL THO, HE HIGHKEY CUTE AND MY FAVE RN AND I AINT SURE IF I SHIP HIM AND JEMMA AS A BRO-THING OR AS A COUPLE YET BUT AYY I'M MAD HYPE. HIS NAN BETTER BE OKAY YO, FO' REAL PROTECT THIS CHILD

srsly tho mali this was such a dope first chapter :3 you introduced us to the main foursome, all of which are super interesting in their own way, and ughh i can't wait to see where u take it yo

however,

not COD, so 0/10. Bye nerd