Talk:Extinction/Chapter 1/@comment-27376543-20150718032137

Danneh literally one chapter in and you playin' with all my emotions and, like, honestly I should've expected this from you and I'm disappointed in myself that i didn't smhh</33

The first thing that comes to mind when I read this issue is the way you write. Now, this isn't something I noticed in your previous stories -- it might just be me only noticing it now, or it's ext. exclusive -- but I love the repetition. Conner repeating to himself the same thing over and over about his family being gone, plus the theme of insanity and being 'crazy' throughout the entire issue was done really well. Starting it with Conner asking Bob the mannequin (best char ever btw) if he was crazy, and then you ending it with the question that continues to linger in my mind is insane, so like huge pr0ps to you.

Okay so I also love the foreshadowing present throughout the entire issue. From showing what Conner will do to survive (poor ms whiskers honestly) and the threat of his ghost family/the talks about insanity, I honestly can't wait to see what's in store for Conner in the future and if these themes continue to be devleoped and l'm so hyype

Conner is interesting now, in the original extinction, he was this ba dude whose only goals were to protect ash, and to protect himself, so I'm really excited to see if this'll remain consistent with the original story or if you're planning on switching it up on us, we can never tell with you danneh, and tht's another reason why your writing so good ;D

All in all, an excellent pilot Danny, your writing is as amazing as always, and I'm hooked on Extinction! I can't wait for more ahhh<3