Talk:Mosaic/Issue 1/@comment-26217707-20140604030436/@comment-5458918-20140604141859

HEYHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! OMG! Thank you very much for reading and leaving a comment. As you said at the start of your review, I'ma write this as I read it.

IMHO, nitpicks are definitely the best forms of advice, and I'm gonna do my best to improve them. I did notice as I was writing that the sentences seemed a bit similar, but action scenes piss me off so much XD I always think quiet scenes or just scenes that involve little to no running are much easier to write. BUT, with this new info I think I can improve a lot in the upcoming issues.

The flashbacks are actually the main part of the story... at least I think. It's just my way of showing how characters became the people they are in this world, which means that each flashback needs to be important. I'm so happy that you enjoyed them, I was afraid in case they'd kinda screw up the feel of the issue.

Trust me, there's still a little bit left in Danny's introduction. I think their relationship will be very interesting, especially in the next issue. But don't worry, the whole "meeting another survivor by chance and teaming up while trusting this stranger surprisingly quickly" intro will twist a bit in the future. I'm gonna try and do different things for each character to hopefully draw people's attention to the newbies.

I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. I was afraid in case I didn't put enough into the issue, since all that really happened was Mike killing a zombie and meeting someone. But, I needed it to be slow-paced to introduce his story.

Thank you again for reading and leaving a review, MasterBait <3 You're always in my heart (#andsometimesyourinmywetdreams).