User blog:PBR Sharpshoot/ALRTF Post Volume Blog (Spoilers to be expected)

OMG I forgot that I used to do these. I figured I should do one more now that volume 4 of A Long Road to Fortune is complete, even though I think I have a pretty good idea of what areas of the story need work. Still, some 3rd party input would be interesting as well. With that, here are the questions:

1. What do you think of the story so far?

2. What areas of the story do you think need work?

3. Favorite character? (May be too soon, but I would still love some input).

4. Any other comments about the story?

5. What would you like to see explored in future flashbacks?

If there's a glaring issue or problem you have with the story, PLEASE don't pull any punches. Criticism only helps me and ALRTF improve. Don't be afraid to include spoilers in your comments.

Thanks in advance!