Talk:Stranded/Episode 1/@comment-5910587-20150720024416

"Plain yellow walls littered with anti-bullying and acceptance texts"

hehehe after the scene before, this was my favorite line :)

Okay, i have a confession to make. I read the first few issues of stranded a long time ago but was too lazy/too much of a fgt to leave comments so here I am again :D :D

tbh I love Miranda as a protagonist. She has problems that I think a lot of us can relate to, and I think on a surface level, she doesn't seem strong (in the traditional sense of the word) but I think she really is. She has to put up with a lot of bullshit omg. When the zombs hit, I think she'll be one of the tougher characters tbh. Also, I wanna touch on this BITCH Jerri -- how the hell are u gonna call Miranda a dyke when your name is Jerri? Like literally bitch you sound like you're a fat middle aged white man gtfo my face.


 * ) Anyway. I also really liked that although it's in third person, you sprinkled Miranda's thoughts all over the issue. She's a sassy one, I love it ;D I think it really helped me attach to her character more than I already did. I also liked how you mentioned Miranda's attention to detail -- again, when the zombs hit, I think this is a trait that could make her a valuable asset.

One of the other more promient chars -- Oliver. Idk how I feel about him yet. He seems like he chars, but he also seems like the popular kid who feels pressured to stay cool, y'know. Which I get, but yeah, he's still 50/50 for me now.

Jordana, tho, i love her haha. I liked how she kept it real with Miranda. Blunt, redhead with glasses? Hot. But i think she's Jane Levy and we all remember what she did in Morts sooooo (jk Jordana <3)

Moving on from characters. WRITING. Very good, clean, what can I say. I like how you start a lot of your scenes with setting descriptions -- I think it gave the school a lot of personality. The dialogue was like, really really good, too. I really love reading dialogue and you did an awesome job, James :D