Talk:Writing Contest 2/Maxwestt/@comment-8483090-20141108204629

Yo yo. Sorry for late reply, man, but here it iz. Let's get started.

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Alright, so I am very pleased to say that you wrote Giacomo. You got down all of his personality, and better yet, added to him, I also like the relationship you gave between him, his parents and his sister, and how each of them had their own distinct personality. Every interaction was great, as was the dialogue in those scenes. I also love the writing, it was so detailed and made each scene feel alive. The plot of the issue was good, although if I can add one piece of critism, it was that the ending felt a littie incomplete. Granted, I still loved the issue, but wanted to see maybe Giacomo prove his father wrong and show that he isn't a wimp.

The issue was still very good, however, and I had a good time reading it. The dialogue, the detailed writing, and the characters were all great.