Talk:Epiphany/Book One/Chapter 4/@comment-7317707-20151028030745/@comment-1107423-20151028213737

Thank you so much Hawk! I'm glad you're enjoying this. I'm surprised you liked Winnie's segment, honestly, it was so foreign to me -- she's so unlike me but I did have so much fun writing it despite my reservations!

I admit, describing New Venice and the events that were happening with Jarod, I hit some major writer's block. I'm self-deprecating to the point of really doubting that I'd be able to do my vision of New Venice justice in writing lol, so I left it open-ended but I will definitely get that vision in writing, because as an audience, I think you deserve that. Thank you for bringing it up, because it was something I was aware of but tried to ignore. This will be fixed in later chapters!