Talk:Anguish & Desire/Chapter Four/@comment-23785492-20170603184222

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Alright waddup, its yo boi here with a surprise comment out of nowhere, we're going to binge-read the entire of this series today. LOL not but we'll try.

Just starting the chapter and fashionhoe is already mentioning buying people, great time for slavery I guess. :O

Ok, listen, listen, you CAN'T have Ken call Kito cute several times in like two sentences and not have them be a thing. It is pride month damnit, let the Keto ship sail!

"We'll figure out this love storyline" Yuka just casually breaking dat fourth wall for romance, don't blame her. I already have it worked out though, it ends in tragedy cause u are rude fitz. D;

FITZ, you are breaking my heart, Keto are too cute and everyone totally sees it. Why are they not a thing????

Ok so chapter is read so we'll start off with character opinions which this was a good chapter for, we learned some things about the boys (although I'm probably going to forget the details such as liking cats but I will make note of who has a crush on who for future reference. Also as a side note, I'm starting to get a bit better with remembering people without having to look them up. Like the obvious more bigger ones right now I can remember fine, some like the model I can remember if they come in without too many other characters in the scene but when it comes to scenes like the sleepover, it gets a bit more hard for me to remember because there is many of them.

Anyway, so starting off with the boys. Ken and Kito are for sure OTP for me like, let it happen??? Obinata isn't really growing on me like he's probably still a dick BUT he's an acceptable dick for now. Idk though, maybe I've just misread it and it's nice to see some more of Nakamoto because before this he was coming off like just Obi's henchman so we got some growth here, I actually wanted to see more of those two as well because they were two of three (I think?) that met Ken when he first woke up so them not being in the other chapters a lot more was bothering me a bit but it's okay, there is at least a good cast to replace that bother.

Shiomi and Satoshi are still pretty cool, I don't like them as much as Ken and Kito but they still good and of course MonoMech and Saishi are ultimate characters like no one beats them ever, don't hurt them pls. ;-; As for Yoichi I honestly don't have an opinion on him and I don't know why? lol poor guy.

As for the girls, my opinion has changed on them really. They're all pretty cute and of course the model has to be the dumb one lmao, I will note though that Nakata is making me think of a girl from the TV show Falling Skies called Maggie, like they're similar in the tough chick with a heart thing but otherwise not really but now I can only picture her when I think Nakata so rip.

As for the storyline, I loved it. It's a really cute chapter and the sleepover was a good idea BUT I would've liked it if you done this special scene in the POV of Chie or something and showed the girl's sleepover as well, that would've been cool. D:<

Again I don't really have any theories which sucks because I wish I had but I'm not much of a theory creator, I just tend to read and go along with the flow so you probably won't get many theories from me sadly but if I come up with one, I'll definitely tell you on facebook or in a comment somewhere.

So yeah, this chapter completely sucked and I'm never reading again, bai. <3