Talk:Evolution/Episode 3/@comment-6293216-20170320132344

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okay u kno me one thing i gotta start out bby saying is how much i adore ur writing style. we were talking about it earlier a bit and i'm a v v simple goth, okay? If the characters aren't interesting, then the story will fall short no matter wot it is, and GOD DAYYYUM I LOVE UR CHARACTERS. I love how Will and Vicky got that same stubborness, I love Dannisha and the Charlie/Daniel relationship, there's just so much going on that i love :3

So u kno my fave is charlie, or at least i think u kno, idk. who knows. ANYWAY. Charlie's mistake here, and his *fight* with Daniel is going to be a highlight of this chapter for me, just cuz they r the otp. Anyway, the fact that Charlie's mistake did compromise the group and got some of their friends killed will be interesting in terms of development, one I'm really looking forward to. There's so much potential for him to grow and i swear if u just sh00t him in the face bc he's pure and that's what evil writers like to do i'mma fly over there and kick ur ass

Dannish, the prez, and the scientist dude are all p interesting as well. The prez isn't trump so she's 0/10 but i kinda really liked their interactions here?? and i hope they -- along with the group that was protecting them -- will join the hotel group.

UR USE OF FLASHBACKS HERE IS REALLY GREAT AND I LOVE LOV LOVE LEVOELVEV LEVOELEvoLVEOVEL SEEING WILL AND BELLA REUNITE AND THE FLASHBACKS LED PERFECTLY UP TO THAT MOMENT AND I NOW UR GONNA FuCKING CRUSH US AND KILL ONE OF THEM THIS SEASON SO FUC U FOR THAT BUT LET ME GET A SCENE OF VICKY REUNITING WITH HER MUM FIRST TYTYTYTYTYTYTYTY

speaking of vicky, i'm pretty excited to see what u got in store for all of those wild kiddos next episode. Vicky, Rey, Bri, Nathan, and Alex are all going out there to save Zoey, Kyle, and Nico and tbh i'd be lying if i said i wasn't nervous. I feel like Vicky, Bri, and Nathan are safe at this point, but if the rest all got murdered next episode, I wouldn't be shocked just completely devestated. ESPECIALLY since Nico is trying to kill himself?? tf bitch?? I feel like Reyna got some nice characterization this ep, so she'll end up being the one to bite the dust if anything goes wrong and i hate u for that bc i love her and she doesn't deserve this u fuck

10/10 overall tho, it isn't a call of duty game so it sucks, but it's a good type of suck. (I JOKE BBY THIS SHIT IS REALLY GOOD AND IM SUCH A PROUD DAD UR KILLING THIS STORY<3333)

P.S. i wanna marry nancy.

P.P.S. if u actually do kill reyna i'm dubbing u Robert Kirkman Jr. and u'll never live it down<3