Talk:Beyond The Dead/Issue 1/@comment-1107423-20130810143804

Warfare, you told me in chat that early issues of BTD are "terrible".

BRO I GOTTA AGREE THIS WAS PRETTY BAD...

...jk <3

First off, I notice a lot of spelling errors. I'm a grammar Nazi so it bugs me, but it's not a deal breaker nor am I going to stop reading because of it. It seems like you haven't gotten into your groove yet when it comes to formatting, and that's okay. It's your first issue! Some stories take 5-10 issues/episodes/chapters/whatever to get into their groove.

I really like the set-up, you've got a good thing going here thus far. The characters are really good, I like Lionell and Paxton already. The death of their teacher and being sent home from school made a good plot point for the first issue, I love how slow everything is falling apart. It makes things extra intense. The addition of mentioning the real-life bath salts incident was pretty cool too, made everything more grounded.

Good start :)