Talk:Beyond My Choices/Issue 12/@comment-27376543-20131228221253

Omgg this was awesome, Warfare! I think this is my first comment on an issue where u write in first person, so, let me just say I love how you write! I really think it's a step-up from olf BMC, and I am enjoying it a lot :D

But, onto this issue: I really loved this issue, man! Of course, I won't complain that my bb Kiara got some spotlight, but I really loved what u did with her (and I'm trying to not be biased when I say so). The way you wrote it, she is definitely the clear outsider of the group, and I can see a few plotlines stemming from this.

And onto Dante and Kyle, stahp bullying my gurl </3. Nah, I kid, but I really enjoyed them this issue! The two are so funny together (loved the Halo: Reach reference btw). and can really see a cool friendship from the two, especially how young Kyle is, maybe a mentor-student type relationship.

But yeah, great issue man, I love the first person and I'm liking where the story is going! Great job :D