User blog:Daryl Maylam/What do you guys think be honest

As I've said I have writer's block so I did a quick paragraph to get some feedback

I wake up to the sound of a woman screaming was it my Mother or was it my sister, I ran downstairs to find my mum being choke at the door by a rotting arm my Mum screaming "Barret help a mans c-c-choking me grab the b-b-baseball b-bat. I rushed to grab the steel baseball bat it's to late the door smashes and my mum was being chewed apart before my very eyes "WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU" I shout to the man stood in front of me by pure anger I smash my baseball bat into his face and keep on hitting him until he is dead. Oh right you don't know me my name is Barret Wallace I am 17 years old student from Reading High School. I am a weak build at the height of 6 ft 5 and I am about to tell you the story of how I died.

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