Talk:Stranded/Episode 4/@comment-5618526-20150503231215

So I like to start off by saying this was your best issue written to date! The writing was really good, and the dialouge was easy to keep up, and stay attached to. Also at this point, you've done a pretty good job with the characters, I feel like if I were thrown into this school with the info I have now, that I could fit in pretty well aside from being really short but thats another story lol.

I feel like I really know each of the characters and that's a good thing, because when you introduce new characters, it doesn't seem as overwhelming or anything!

UGH omg though, I understand  Miranda be getting bullied but it really frustarting she won't accept help from Olvier. Well she's open to it, but it seems more like an issue of trust.

And ooh here you go giving hints, man this is gettin interesting. Mack, Duane, and Oliver doing somebad? I literally have no ideas, and it not until now how much I realize how Jenifer and Kenton are alike. They both have someone who they love a lot, and yet they still struggle on helping them. Getting the old group together could be much more beneficial than we may think it is!

I've finally cuaght up and very glad I did. I'm really looking forward to the next issue man! And I can see you're setting up so many plots, and connections for when the apocalypse unforuntately has to hit. I'm getting so connected to all the characters, damn. With that being said, this series is really off to a good start, and I really enjoy it. If I had to pick a fav, it'll totally be Oliver, and Duane comes in as a close second! Good job Fitzz!