Talk:Welcome to the Now (Pantheon - Episode 1)/@comment-1107423-20131204025638

Okaaay, so I got to reading it. "Pantheon" introduces a wicked new world, with so much depth and exploration in just one episode. I'm in awe, dude.

That opening scene was so visceral. The dead bodies dropping... your mythos behind your zombi-- ehem, adults-- are incredibly intriguing and original. I've never heard anything like that before. I like how you have the separate storylines going on; the set-up is interesting in that I don't know how they will intersect just yet. You've got some very different, very distinct settings. My favorite was the stuff at Bel Uthla. The eerie child prisoners, and poor Casey in particular, left me with a really cool first impression of this new world.

Damien's stuff felt like old-timey Britain, like the early hundreds' - the era of Frankenstein, which you so nicely placed into the script. Aiko & Philastrate are my favorite characters though so far, they've got a clear path and seem the most interesting to follow at the moment. While Damien was one of the more distinctive, I think he'll take a bit of time to grow on me.

The Stalk was fucking creepy - him and his whore Auburn - had one of my favorite moments, "Pardon the intrusion" hahaha. Despite the often spellbinding writing, the storylines are very heavy-handed and a little hard to follow, it made me intrigued. I read scenes multiple times, particularly scenes with The Stalk. The ending revelation was quite shocking, and I'm curious to see where you go with this!

I'm excited to see more man. An excellent pilot, a lot of good set-up and some incredible writing.