Talk:Eden Rising/Episode 5/@comment-4105222-20130823022859

I just got done readin' this...

And wow, again. Took me a little while to get used to the format but yep, got used to it after a while. I honestly thought New Venice was actually in Italy... until it was all explained here. :D It was all about Gwen and New Venice here really, but that beginning scene with Tom, Darla and Sid really got to me, even though it wasn't the main focus. And we move to Gwen--she's really proving to be an amazing main character to look out for. I honestly thought she was going to be bed-ridden when she got shot three times last EP, but nope.... that vest, and this episode set the stage for her awesomeness.

I like Kitty and all, but I was more focused on Lori... losing a baby, murderin' two people, wakin' up to find New Venice marauded?! Seriously John, do you ever let me breathe?! But really, great job throwing us readers into the chaos and feeling it.