Talk:Eden Rising/Episode 30/@comment-26194145-20131225144151/@comment-1107423-20131225162542

Thanks for the feedback gerry, you're amazing <3

I'm glad you mentioned that the scene with Tom dragged on - I felt like it did too, but I wanted to call back the revolver scene from the season 1 finale with Ash and maybe that's why it felt draggy, but I'll definitely keep that in mind when writing future scenes. I feel like a lot of times I keep writing and writing and writing and never realize how long my scenes can drag on, so thank you for pointing that out and it's something I'll focus on in the future.

And yaaaay you like Wolf :D He's gonna be a cool-ass character, I'm excited to dig into him some more.