Talk:Eden Rising/Episode 3/@comment-5993346-20140609202428

Ahh Mister Johns its been a while but I'm back for more.

I'm sure you know I read into great detail and I've already shown that. But today I'm going to cut this comment short as I'm busy writing. Overall I was once again impressed with the dialogue as it feels fluent and natural, the writing was solid etc and I'm getting more familiar with your take to writing scripts. Now the final scene with the General was chilling yet left a good impression and an idea of what's to come etc.

Once again, sorry for cutting it short but I enjoyed this and hope to read the next episode later on.