Talk:Writing Contest 1/Lee Everett/@comment-4631123-20130513200558

Like the other good folks said, the dialouge seemed a bit off at some points. However, I liked the writing style; you made it 100% minimalistic, which I personally think is very hard. So I have no issues with the writing style, quite opposite in fact.

The story was fine and you got the beginning of the outbreak introduced pretty well (a few cross-over issues, but let's forget that). Nice work.