Talk:Endangered/Issue 11 (Old)/@comment-KnowledgeProspector-20140217060317

Finally got around to read all of this. All I can say is, man.... even though there were a bunch of characters here, they all get their nice respective progression. In particular, what caught my attention was Vicky's and Michael's, and Joel's. Joel's I guess because of Angry Birds. And because he's Troy Baker. But yeah mostly Angry Birds.

Secondly, Vicky and Michael. It's really interesting how this relationship is going to turn up knowing that it was a womanizer like Michael who took Vicky's v-card. I hoped that a second meeting would've made it better but yeah, sucks that it didn't. Michael, damn.... fix yo life up. Give this girl a chance.

Apart from these guys, you do well to show interactions between characters. Sarah's very smart, good on her. B-boy, don't work so hard. Ethan seems like a cool father, and all his connections are very interesting. Awesome to see Sandra's home, and her interaction with Haruka; she's like her complete opposite. McCoy is makin' an honest living and Dre's dad is a famous producer of rap beats. And lastly, I hope Tate and Destinee are okay.