Thread:TWDFan630/@comment-4770929-20150416000806

Just wanting to give you a few tips to help you with writing

- Try to make your issues longer than 600 words, maybe more like 2/3k

- Develop character more by actually writing scenes, right now it seems like you are just writing the "synopsis" with some dialogue

- Describe the environment, what the characters are doing, how they are doing it and how they speak or react

- Don't kill characters as soon as they are introduced, make them different and realistic

- Don't name characters off of people you know

- Use correct grammar (The title of your story "Dead Walkings" doesn't make any sense)

- Only work on one or two stories at a time

- Characters can make jokes, don't take the story too seriously

and please

- Stop using so many actors from the walking dead

Sorry if I seemed rude, I'm just trying to help improve the quality of your writing. From what I have gathered, part of this wiki is to help each other out with writing,

Sabby 