Talk:Dead Weight/Issue 1/@comment-23785492-20131215211923

I'm liking the idea, however its a slight problem for me to understand fully whats going on :S

However thats possibly due to me having a different writing style to you kinda so yeh :P

Anyway so yeh I like the idea and its a good start for it being your first story, welcome to the wiki by the way, and it has potential to go somewhere with it. Good start though.