Talk:The Ones Who Remain/Issue 2/@comment-26217707-20131215233842

Woahhhhhhhhhh, this was amazing, Fitz! Rarely when I'm reading something can I say I'm absolutely disappointed when it ends, but with this I was because I just wanted to keep reading. Seriously, I want to point out your dialogue, which was stellar here. Every character is different as well, their conversations flowed so naturally--it is a true talent to write crisp dialogue without the reader getting bored. Amazing job. Also, the writing in general was crazy-good, and I love your characters so far, even Adrianna.

And I thought I would never say these words, but omfg I love Brenda. Legit, she might be my favorite character so far. Her relationship with Mike is very realistic and cute, and seeing her as a leader, worried for her people, working toward a solution, is great. I also love Cal, Nikki, Mike, Jared...basically everyone so far lol.

I would really like to commend how much you have improved in your writing. It has been absolutely amazing to see, and you have easily become one of the wiki's stand-out talents. I thought LoT was great, but TOWT is going to be something special. I can tell.