Thread:AlVan/@comment-5790496-20130627234955/@comment-3520361-20130628005843

I think I need to start over, and make it simpler. The scope was just too...big. So far I've been writing it like a very detailed novel, with most of the dialogue being exactly the same as from the actual pilot. I need to start over, or at least finish this one and write the rest differently from now on.