Talk:Dead Awakened/Episode 5 (old)/@comment-5618526-20150110205432

Okay, so it legit took me five hours to read 5 episodes. I really wanted to catch every detail, so here it goes.

First of all, oh my gosh, can I just say how much I'm in love with Dead Awakened already? Not that I wasn't before, but re-reading was definitely needed. Though, there' so much stuff that has happened, it's hard to catch up on every topic.

So far, I already have favorites okay! Uhm, Kenburg, Ramillo, and suprisingly Alex were my favorites. Sepciifally the friendship between Ramillo and the boys, Though, Jaime does seem a bit off? But you mention he's prolly homesick, so that makes up for his quiet personel, and the stuff with my boy Darrius and his female problems really sucks. It kind of seems like he could be heading towards a mid-life crisis, considering the ammount of alcohol he assumed in Ep 3.

But FUCK MAN, I'm killing myself trying to figure out who's this Marissa girl is. She's prolly really hot if she went after Ramilo. PLOT TWIST: it's a guy. No, but that would suck, so I'm looking forward to future issues, hoping  we'll get to see something more with this developing plot! And can I just say, Alex and Kenburg only talked like 10 seconds in total, and I already ship it? There's nothing wrong with that, nothing at all.

Oh yeah, another thing I wanted to touch up on was with the Mall shootings. That's really crazy, I don't think I've read anything where a mass killing pe-apocalypse occured. So it was totally different, but I feel bad for James though. With his child being killed, and his daughter can't even come to the memorial? That's rough man.

And omg all the Junior stuff, was really crazy. We had our first death which I was honestly expecting. And to add on, you've done a great job incorurating other chars with other stuff. Like Bruno being homeless, was totally unexpected. Not gonna lie, thought Jasmin and homegirl would be like "come over our house so we can get on ur train." But it didn't happened lmaoooo. But then hold up, he's the nephew of Blair, like whuuuuut? I'm interested in seeing where all of this plays out later!

Oh yeah, that brief cameo with my boy Jace, I love it! And don't worry, you wrote him well! Also I like Mimi, and it's interesting how you'll take on a char from ALRTF so I look forward to that some more. Uhm, I'm pretty blank right now, but I'll prolly update this comment later. There's just os much in five issues. Look forward to episode 6 man :). You did a very well fantastic job at writing, kept me entertained :)