Thread:Hellfire36o/@comment-96.8.11.10-20130222070509/@comment-5932380-20130301053737

Glad that you're enjoying my story so far. College is holding me back from continuing the story. Once spring break starts, I'll try to get as many issues in as possible. As for your tips, thank you so much for sharing the errors that I am creating through my writing.

1. I know some of my writing is hard to read. I do have that issue of accidentally leaving out words, I just hate to re-read my work, it's a bad habit of mine. However, since it's hard  for readers such as yourself to try to understand the text from my mistakes, I'll be more committed to being more careful and re-read dialog to see if it's right.

2.  I don't really understand that much on what you mean by seperate the conversation. Do you mean by seperating farther apart than what they are now? Also, you mention that you like Hope On The Rocks. Should I change my writing style to that rather than a script? If so, then I'll change it on the next arc, which is soon, it might be the next issue.

3. As for the unexplored conflicts of Chad, Kim, and Aaron. I am well aware that in issue 6 I introduced the relationship between the three characters, and I know I really just left that story behind. I rushed the story with totally leaving those conflicts out. As soon as the next arc is finished, I might go back into that story, however, it'll be hard to transit  to that section of the story now. Especially since it seems that both characters are cool with each other now. I'll try come up with something.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me and giving me things to think about in the future. Good luck and have fun writing your story, I cannot wait to read it.