Talk:Dead Awakened/Episode 3 (old)/@comment-26217707-20140410032200/@comment-4105222-20140410041300

Oh shucks, AJ comment! Love it.

As you've brought up way earlier, this tense thing has stuck with me... I think it's a problem I need to look into since I tend to overlook it. Maybe I don't read my sentences carefully enough, maybe I need to mind my usage, maybe it's a writing style I've subconsciously kept. Either way, I'll try to look at what's gewin' awn.

As for the rest, thank you very much. I feel like I did my job thanks to all the stuff you mentioned. But yeah, I wanted everyone to have their very own spot here, and I wanted to see how far I could take it if I stubbornly kept continuing and continuing this episode until I felt like it was complete. This was supposed to be so much longer, because Alex was actually supposed to attend the club as well and get a few drinks down. But, since I wanted to end it pretty soon, and since I felt like it didn't fit her too well, I didn't go forward with it. Looking at it now though, I could've written this much better. Guess that improvement will be saved for future episodes.

So... what else can I say, other than thank you for reading this. Plays a big part in my motivation. As long as you continue to read, I'll continue to provide. Thanks man. :)