User blog comment:Crosider/Shit that's annoying me in 90% of y'all stories/@comment-25202500-20140116152227/@comment-3168561-20140116152854

It bothers me that there are a lot of awesome stories, that seem to drag themselves down by adding alot of these elements.

I know i did so myself, and that is what partially ruined my stories (along with my laziness and incompetence) but I am trying to make people aware that they can do so much to improve