Talk:The Dead World/Issue 2/@comment-24583095-20131224160436

First, I like to say that flashback was pretteh neat :D! And I like the relationship we have between our two characters William  and Natasha! And oh no, the gasss ahh D:! And that's pretty cool how Will use to be in the military! Seems like an organized guy with plans. No wonder he made it this far into the apocalyspe. The writing was well, but I'm sure there are way less grammar mistake as you've improved :P!