Talk:Life Will End/Chapter 1/@comment-23785492-20131219213710


 * claps* I gotta admit that was an amazing first chapter I was interested the whole way through it, not bored of a single bit. I liked all of the characters introduced to, especially Vlad and Mick, them two I find interesting and looking forward to seeing where there story goes.

I liked the little backstories we got of Mick and Vlad, showing some of their past and the bandits plus zombies scenes were tense, I admit I thought Zach was gonna bite the dust then cause it really looked like he was.

All in all this was a perfect first chapter and this deffiantly desearves more readers and attention, good work Mage. :)