Talk:Apocalypse Life/Issue 3/@comment-5793555-20130606211645

Damn, KP, I gotta say, this was some good writing right here. I don't even know where to begin. With Henry and Julius' interaction in this issue, you could just feel how much they cared for each other, and how much of an important part of Julius' life Henry is. And you didn't even have to say it in the story, you just wrote their interaction so good that the reader can feel it, which I believe is one of the telltale signs of an awesome story. The way it's done actually makes me wonder if you based their interaction off of you and someone you love like Julius does Henry. =P It's that good. The details in your story so far are great, they aren't so little that you can't understand what's going on clearly enough, and they aren't too much so that the reader feels overwhelmed with descriptions and technical things rather than the characters and their journey. Again, this story could be compared to a professional one. And when I say professional, I mean not only is the story great, but that it feels like a real story. Some of the stories here on this site are great, but they feel like a person's story online. Doesn't mean that they are any less great, it just means that those stories don't have the same energy or feeling as a published story. Your story has that energy that keeps the reader hooked and waiting for more, keeps them wanting to read your story, not just reading it for some other reason like friendship or boredom or because it's there. This story keeps me interested, which is a hard thing to do, I may be open to a lot of things, but I'm picky about the stories I read and the stories that I actually like, and this, this is one of the stories I like. Very much so.

Okay, so sorry to spam you with so much writing, but I had to let you know what I feel. =P