Talk:Apocalypse Life/Issue 21/@comment-26217707-20130409004032

Oh, wow. That Elaine seen was very...it made me uneasy. But it was amazing. Seriously, I was biting my nails throughout the whole issue, man. Awesome.

BUT I DO HAVE ONE PROBLEM.

I've noticed it before, but I didn't think it was a big issue, but I noticed it more than usual this issue. You seem to change tenses often. Like, you'll switch from past to present. For example, here: ''"Ree pushes the door, expecting it to open; instead, she was held back. She tackles it again a few more times, until she comes to a realization; the door was locked. She tries to hit the knob with her pipe, but it didn’t seem to do anything." ''The tense kept going back and forth and it got kind of confusing. Other than that though, this was one of my favorite issues. :D