Talk:Life Will End/Chapter 1/@comment-69.249.199.51-20140121153953

(Dis is infected idk if im logged in so yeeee)

As da others said below me, this was pretty impressive. The writing was pretty spot on, and action was good. The whole ending action with infected was good, as was bandits at the beginning. One thing I must say I like is that they're trying to save ammo. I just like when people write that cuz it more realistic instead of "zombie! Zombie! Shoot! Shoot!" :P

For the characters, I'd say I enjoy Mick/Vlad/Melanie the most. Melanie is cool because she was just a normal computer whiz, Mick seems like a p boss protag, and I can see lots of stuff planned for Vlad. But yee this was a p good first chapter, I'll be keeping up :D