Talk:Endangered/Book One/Prologue/@comment-4105222-20190929101516

Welcome back, Danny!!! It is good to see something new from you, the protagonist of UFSW, here. :D The intro is such a great touch, as if you're speaking to those (ahem, me) who want to go back to UFSW and write. It is such a great opening that speaks not only to us, but to the character we have here: Charles.

It's a quick prologue, but I definitely felt for Charles's story. It didn't take long but you did very well establishing his story, which looks to be ending after this.... and that leads in to a good introduction to this new Endangered. Your writing has definitely grown and I'm also very glad to see that. Not rusty at all. Keep up the good work and I hope to see a new issue soon.