Talk:World of Anarchy/Chapter 1/@comment-4105222-20140820013853

Wuddup son. I saw your blog and thought, "what the hell. Might as well read UFSW stories again." Yeah, I know, I haven't really read anything here for a while. Your blog reminded me that I should again. I comment on issues wherever I see fit, so... yeah, my commenting won't be steady.

I read Bait's comment below me, and I agree with him. Also I saw some bits of misspellings, but not enough for me to lose my focus. We all make typos and misspellings, and it's something we get better at as we keep writing. Apart from that minor detail, your grammar is solid, you show emotion well, and you kept the feeling of the story at unease. Good job on that. I already find David's backstory fascinating, because you showed that so well. Keep up on that regard, too.

Hmmm... this is the first issue, though, so I'll keep progressing and come up with better comments for you.