Talk:A Long Road to Fortune/Issue 28/@comment-4105222-20140209113840

I've actually read this already but I never left a comment. I'm afraid I might have to keep it short since I still need to do a lot of catching up....

First and foremost, (and this was something I never got to bring up when it happened) you write Mendoza's speeches very clearly. I can really feel his crowd presence just by the way the words flow. Because of that Mendoza continues to become an amazing leader character, notably because you've shown well-enough that he is one.

Yuri's character continues to become clear... when she's finally gotten that chance to summarize it to a person it became clearer for then. And to do it to a good-looking man like Frank... amazing timing. It's pretty much what led to what I (and I'm pretty sure plenty of others) have been waiting for. Some bow chika wowow. Some good ol'fashion lovin'. Okay, enough of that, but yeah, you've built up this relationship well enough that the ... um, sex, got me freaking out at my screen.

Same goes for Liza and Ashton, too. But I've read 29 and I know what precedes this....

What other good way but to combine those two scenes together in one issue? You did things right, PBR.