Talk:The Dead World/Episode 1/@comment-6293216-20170921112637

wtf Jamie father that was f*cked omg im gonna mur_der you. You told me u were shook at urself and I see why now smfhhhhhhhh

Anyways my boi this was a great opening episode and I went over the original dead world to compare writing styles and damnnnn it's really just amazing how much you've improved I am so proud of thou. <333

Will is beast as always and Natasha is interesting. I'm not sure if I see them as romantic partners yet like I heard they did in the original so I'm excited to see how they progress. More importantly, I like how there are clear directions for these two to go in story wise; Will and his guilt & Natasha and dear depending nature. Watching them grow will be great!!!

The backstory with Will's fam annoyed me because Will pissed me off!! >:( he really fucked that up all he had to do was he like "lol kbye" but nooooooo smfh. And then him killin the dude who honestly I can't even fault for that was just icing on the cake. Watching Rebecca/Victoria die was quite....horrible. They didn't deserve it. I'm taking them away from you but u can keep Will/

1/19 decent enough