Talk:Dead Weight/Issue 2/@comment-23785492-20131215212428

For me i'd say the writing style is improving in this one from the last one but i'm still kinda going back and reading a line etc to understand some of it but its improving. Your only new as far as I know :S so you'll get better, I mean if you'd seen my writing when I wrote my first Issues....i'm not even going there. o.o

Point is, the more you write the better you get. :)