Talk:Mosaic/Issue 1/@comment-1107423-20140531002737/@comment-5458918-20140531010300

OMG JOHN! Thank you so much for reading and leaving a comment <3 It actually means so much.

I was glad that you understood what I was trying to do with Michael. I was really just trying to make him a 50/50 type of character. Is he the bad guy or not? And also that he has changed between then and now, how he sees himself as the bad guy before, and now tells Danny that he can trust him. Unless... maybe he hasn't changed. ;)

And I agree with you FULLY on the descriptions. Usually what I do is when I write conversations between characters, I try and find a way to make the converstation feel and sound real, which ends up taking up most of my brain and leaving a big gaping hole in the descriptions. Which is why at the beginning there is a lot of descriptions, but towards the end it lacked a lot. But now that I see somebody else has noticed this, I'll work on it as hard as I can in future issues.

The commas and quotation marks... you have no idea how much they piss me off XD A couple months back I was reading a book, and noticed that the commas and such were before the quotation mark, and then I went online and read an episode of one of my stories, realizing that I do the exact opposite. And when I tried to change them, I suddenly had the habit of putting them after the quotation marks. It has always annoyed me. And, I even had it on a list of improvements for this back in January when I was planning this, and it looks as if my habit got the best of me again.

BUT, NOT TO WORRY! I am gonna fix this as soon as the next issue. I'm gonna have to get a new habit of putting them before the quotation marks.

I feel like we need to have the bro fist. It's a bro fist moment. :P

Thank you again for this wonderful comment, and I will take your advice and use it to make future issues better. <3 (#iloveyoubutnohomookayalittlehomobutjustdonttellanyone)