User blog:Vauseman/New Story: Paradise Lost

I'm kind of new here, so I'd thought I would promote my zombie story. Here it is: http://undeadfanstories.wikia.com/wiki/Paradise_Lost

Synopsis:

'''The dead now reign over the world. In present day Illinois, Jack Foster takes to the road to get away from the undead, with his daughter, his sister, and his sister's boyfriend accompanying him. Jack must take the leadership role of making the tough decisions: Do we kill him? How should we ration? Are these people trustworthy? Read and find out what toll this will take as he ventures through a world ruled by the undead.'''

I'm trying to create a nice balance between action/character development, so some issues will be action packed with zombie killing while others will focus more on character and relationships, and some will have a mixture of both. I'd appreciate if maybe some people could start reading it, telling me what you like and what you don't!