Talk:Writing Contest 1/Dixonlovessquirrels/@comment-4105222-20130524094054

Wow. A few things I'd like to say about this one.

First, you write really well. I like your writing style. It's descriptive, but short... just the right amount of detail.

Secondly, wow! It's like you know who the Hermit actually is. This piece has made me even more sympathetic to him... he's not just a random redshirt needing to die for the sake of the main characters. The backstory you created for him added so much dimension. Now I feel sorry for his death. You've shown that he was indeed a hermit for a reason. Great job on this.