User blog comment:PBR Sharpshoot/ALRTF Post Volume Blog (Spoilers to be expected)/@comment-27376543-20131205200517

1. What do you think of the story so far? I love it, PBR, and I'm not just saying that. It's a great storyline, you're a fantastic writer, and I could go on and on.

2. What areas of the story do you think need work? Well, I'll just say that I love that you're looking for construction criticism, and ways to improve yourself, but honestly, I can't really think of much.

3. Favorite character? (May be too soon, but I would still love some input). I loved Mr. Chet, and since he left the story I'll forever be broken </3. But seriously, out of the alive characters, how can you not love Ashton/Liza?!? They're so frickin cute together & so well likeable.

4. Any other comments about the story? Just, keep up the good work, PBR. That's all I can really say aside from the repetition of me saying that you're a great writer, and I can't wait to see where you're going with this.

5. What would you like to see explored in future flashbacks? Hmm, this is kinda hard, actually. I'd like to see whatever you think would make for good source material!