Talk:Endangered/Issue 17 (Old)/@comment-Walkerbait22-20140309151931

DAT DANIEL CD DOE

DAT LISETTE AND ANAHI DOE

DAT DESSE DOE

DOES THAT COVER ALL MY DOE'S? I THINK SO. SPOILERS BITCHES.

K, I'm done being obnoxious :D

I'll start off with that Daniel character development doe cuz God damn we sure got some. He was never one of my faves (as you know, I'm not a big fan of assholes) but I really liked him here. Seeing him as this shy kid, and realizing his father madr him the douchemonster he is was really interesting. Even better was the very unique way you revealed the Ryker/Brown conflict, with it all centering around Isabella's death. Speaking of Ryker, the way you humanized him was really good here, too. I felt bad AF for the guy D: Still speaking of Daniel, in present day we got his asshole side (I DONT APPRECIATE YOU SPEaKING TO LISETTE AND ANAHI THAT WAY BRUH WATCH YOURSELF KFTHX) so that was rereally true to his character. That Desse doe trying to kill him, then Harold stepping in, was really intense all the way through. You're definitely one of the best action/suspense writers here.

Now dat Lisette and Anahi tho. Of course I got mention their hyped up appearance and you definitely delivered, Danny. I really love their dynamic introduced in thst opening scene, and how you subtly brought out their character traits, like Anahi's PTSD, and Lisette bein' sneaky af :D Cant wait to see more of them (Daniel better watch his mouth next time)

All in all, a very sparsely populated issue, but I think it worked well--less characters meant more clear focus on Daniel and a clearer introduction for Linahi.