Talk:Anguish & Desire/Chapter One/@comment-5618526-20160712151812

HEERE WE GO. I TOLD YOU I WAS LOOKIN FORWARD TO READ THIS WHEN I HAD THE TIME N I DO WOOOOOOOO.

"Earth to Greenie" IS THIS A MAZE RUNNER REFERENCE?!!!??!!

Okay so we meeting characters and I'm def intrigued by all the prospects of the stories mostly since it deals with everyone sorta being very good at one particular skill. You did a good job at making me get excited to meet all the characters, and the way you set it up to have it all go down in a gym is brilliant. Fast and efficient :)!

First off, Yosano is just too cute man. Everything she does just sorta likes a butterfly in my heart even if she thought my boy greenie was a chick lmao. I ain't going to lie, he lowkey do look like one but that's not bad, it just means he is pretty. I wanna ship him and Yosama but I could see the sexual chemistry wit some fo the other girls ;), you know what I mean dawg.

Dude I wouldn't mind punching in the face is Nakamoto, IDK he just gives me a evil ryan secrest vibe and all that shiz. Plus his face is too pretty lmao. Oh yea Tomori FINE ASF. BOYYYY LET ME BE AN ANIME CHARACTER ONE DAY, SHE CAN GET IT 24/7777777 HSSHHSSHDFHSDF

Speaking about the anime stuff, the whole issue was pretty refreshing to read then the normal stuff. I liked the style of writing you chose, and I think you nailed th POV. I always struggled trying to write POV but u made it seem easy, good job man.

Lastly, the headmaster, that dude is a weirdo LMAO. I like what you have in stored though, interesting topic and with greenie being the ultimate survivial, it excites me with what he can bring to the table other than crying lmao. Although Shimazaki and Nakata gonna be a problem ;o. The last scene was touching as well, just being in greenie's head at the moment he learns his whole future is pretty much fucked was depressing :(.

overall, this isn't pokemon go -1/10