Talk:A Long Road to Fortune/Issue 33/@comment-26217707-20140209091516

k i been reading this for an hour so im just gonna cover what comes to my head first UHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Jaime you crazy. That bit with Ashton/Max/Jaime was definitely my favorite of the issue because it did a few things I really liked: we got that Max/Ashton relationship development and then the Jaime development. That entire time, I was legit thinking what Max said: Jamie scurry. It made me uncomfortable, honestly, that he'd think about killing Max and Ashton....wtf. Connecting his bloodlust back to Liza at the end there was a great touch too.

OMG VALDEZ <3 Funny af scene right there, great job, all I gotta say about that. And nice to see Yuri/Frank seem more natural now.

I also really loved Yyvette and Zarez's small little scene there--Zarez a wise motherfucker omg he had that grandpa feel immediately and his whole documenting history stuff did a lot for his character for me, as did Yvette's interest in it (she's adorable af).

I also really like Santiago--I loved his flashback last issue and then his interaction with Curly (fkn Curly) was really well done, one of your better dialogue moments there. Santiago's efforts to actually contribute (TAKE NOTE CURLY) is definitely a plus for me. Even if he is wyet (spiderman).

Overall, great issue with some really good character stuff--I think you way you bounced this one off of the last issue was very interesting. They're both very different but they both turned out really well.