Talk:Surviving, Not Living/Issue 16/@comment-4631123-20130423174723

Really great issue. Nice to see some flashbacks. Personally, I love them, but that might just be me.

If I should say one thing you could do better, it's your way of introducing characters. When you have an omniscient narrator like here, you know everything about everyone. You could have told a little more about the Tallie family before going into the action. Even the mailman as well, that would have been a cool one. This is the same as when you introduced Jackie and Anthony and the others. Give them time. Other than that, awesome.