Thread:Hellfire36o/@comment-96.8.11.10-20130222070509/@comment-6664208-20130303180246

How's it going bruh. Sorry, I didn't make myself clear. I'll try to explain.

1) I know exactly what you mean. I don't like to either as I start to doubt myself and rework the story into something I'm unsatisfied with. What I did was get an editor. He looks over whatever I did and I gave him the ability to add any ideas he likes. That way your vision stays intact. That's what I did anyway.

2) It was really an issue in the beginning issues where a conversation between two people would be - Aarong said "blah blah blah" Chad replied "yada yada yada". You see how that's just on one line? I was saying do it more like

Aaron said "blah blah blah"

"Yada yada yada" Chad replied

"So and so, such and such"

"But this and that and the third"

Kim interjected "This this and that"

You see how that works? The first four lines you knew it was a conversation between Aaron and Chad and then the fifth line it introduces a new person, and it keeps going like that. However, you did change it up to script type of conversation so it's not as confusing anymore. I'm kinda used to novels where the writing just flows and we assume who's speaking until a third party is introduced. The script format isn't bad though.

3) Yeah I sort of noticed that. It all seems fine and dandy now, but hey, people harbor bad feelings for a long time. So maybe something is unresolved. Sorry if it seems like I'm pressuring you, just something I noticed. You don't have to follow it lol. Oh btw, HSOTD returns end of the month or in April.