Talk:Extinction/Chapter 2/@comment-5910587-20151005184004

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Chapter Dos of Ext. Update: conner still crazy as hell. He will prob get crazier but I loves me some crazy. Let me tell you, i'm really loving this idea of Shane as antag. I dont think something like this has been done before -- a dead guy as the main antag. Shane is gonna make Conner do some fucked up shit, and when that time comes, can we really blame Conner? Technically, the guy is mentally ill... is it his fault if he does some terrible shit? It's definitely a grey area and i dont think theres really an answer.

Also -- this story makes me uncomfortable. But in a good way. Like, the scenes with Conner and his mannequin family with their dead eyes and cold "skin"... something about him interacting with them like they're people, kissing his wife, ruffling his boys' hair, it creeps me out tbh. If thats what you were goin for, you nailed it af. The fact that Conner is truly aware that his "reality" with his family isn't actually reality at all but just chooses to ignore the truth... :( Already, I can tell Conner is gomma be way more complex than he was in OG Ext.

OMG BB BOY ASH <3 Shane calling him a bitch boy and stuff lmaooo, poor Ash u not a bitch boy. Im interested in how Ash is gonna change noe that he's a bit older. Also, what a way to start he and Conner's relationship. Conner just shot his fken dad. I really wanted to see the aftermath of that but it seems like I must wait until next Chapter. The scene with Josh was def the highlight of the issue, the dialogue was A+. "The war of good and evil, sanity and insanity..." I really loved that line tbh. You had a lot of good narrative moments in here, I'm really loving the cynical, sarcastic voice you're using for Extinction -- like, the line about infected killing any human they see and humans killing any humans they see. Darkly hilarious. The tone really makes it fun to read (even if it is already depressing af)