Talk:A Long Road to Fortune/Issue 26/@comment-26217707-20131220213355

What a sexy, long issue. Where should I start? With Vdez of course! I really loved the development he got there, the explanation behind his chill ways. It was a believable one as well.

Then Yuri. Her little section was amazingly written, I must say, and it's nice to see her out and about again.

Ashton, Liza, and Mimi's scene was very enjoyable as well. Lizhton had a little fight, yes, but it showed nothing but how much they care about each other. Then the hilarious Mimi has them kiss and make up. Still, Mimi's thoughts are still lingering on those drugs...that's got me worried, because you're doing a great job with her.

Then we've got our more minor characters getting the spotlight. Sandra and Max have always interested me tbh, and this little revelation about Max was cool. I'd like to see where you expand that.

Mario. The more you get into his addiction the more I feel bad for him. He's hit the bottom of desperation, but he must find a way to get out of it.