Talk:Writing Contest 2/Cperez13/@comment-8483090-20141108180433

okay okay, sorry for the late comment. I read this a while ago but was to lazy to comment, so here I be.

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Okay, wow. You are one sick son of a bitch :( This issue was really well written, and that ending was depressing holy sheeet. First and foremost, you nailed Jessica and you got her dymanic with Abby great, imo. The whole storyline, and the slow revelation of what really happened, was great, as was that final confrontation with Damien. Jessica was finally ready to protect Abby, but it was too late, and that scene where she let the infected tear her apart was great, as I stated.

The dialogue, writing, and characters were all good, and I think you did a great job here with this issue.