Talk:Wild World/Issue 1/@comment-8483090-20141014040654

Yo, yo, yo. So it took me longer than I said (im an asshole but im sure u know dis by now, srry) but I got around to reading Wild World! (I almost got beat my coach for doing so, but that is a story for chat). Okay okay, so onto the issue. Not gonna lie, and as Im sure KP said below, this issue was freaking incredible. Like, I'm really not joking, I loved every second reading it. Even with it's megga lenght I didn't even consider to stop once because I was so inested into what was going on.

Now, naturally, I think the star of the issue was Raul. His amazing no line appearance, the way he watches Anna...truly amazing. Okay, obviously the main star of the issue was Anna and Daniela! Now, as I said in the preview comment below, I loved Anna. From just the preview I loved Anna, and now with the full issue out I can honestly say she is amazing. I mean, in just one issue you developed her so much, and in all honesty she seems like a real, natural person, like someone in real life. I can see Chet's traits reflected through her actions, and that is somethign I loved because it just went on to show not only how good their relationship is, but how real it is. Her interactions with the other characters (no matter how brief) were all great, espically with Daniela! Then of course there was the scene near the end where she freaking stoopd up to Fgt. Suares! She may not be some big, strong woman but she is sure as hell strong in her own right. Tbh, in one issue I think Anna is already one of the best female leads on da wiki.

Then we got Daniela, who just like Anna, I adore. Now, this may be baised on my part since she is a gamer and I consider myself a gamer, so I naturally love her already. Her character thouugh is so different from Anna's, and don't get me wrong I absolutely love Anna, but I related to Daniela so much. She's outgoing, good looking, and funny, but dat medicore self-esteem, man. You did a great job of showing that she does love Anna, but at the same time, envies her because it brings her pain. It's a very feeling that I feel a lot in comparsion to other people, and so I just related to her so quickly. (To bad I can't have her cuz fgt aj </3 and omg I see she not in virgin category, nuh Daniela wut r u doing). I also, wanna add quickly, that their reactions to the apocalypse were all so realistic. So, great job on Anna and Daniela. I luv them both so much already and I wish I could say both of them will never die but.....;__;. Daniela's death in ALRTF now has a way bigger impact on me.

I must say, you do a great job at introducing minor chars and making me feel so much for them. Patricia, Daniela, and Agulia. I wasn't really that sad about their deaths from just a ALRTF standpoint, since they were naturally minor, but seeing them being fleshed out....it gives me such a new viewpoint on their deaths. Great job there.

It was, as KP said, cool to see Mendoza and his boys. I know that they're gonna make it out of here alive, but I'm so intrested to see how they end up in ALRTF, so I'm hoping to see more of them. And damn dat Jamie x Agulia bromance, digging that so much af. SPEAKING OF AGULIA, as I mentioned above, it was great to see him fleshed out as a character here. I'm digging him so far and, as with Daniela, I will never look at him in ALRTF the same way.

Then we got....Fgt. Suares of the Fgt army. Now, let me make myself clear, I don't see him as truly evil. Sure, he forced people to the camp, but it's most likely safer there, right? Sure, he shot those people, but they were already dead, right? I saw him as more of a "The end justify the means" type guy. I also understood where he was coming from with the "we shouldn't got to Mexico City" speech (Let me make myself clear though, I was backing up Anna and Mendoza the whole way, but I understood him). But, then that last scene came.....DAMNIT SUARES. Get over yourself bro. I don't like you, but I won't label you a fgt just yet. If you pull more shit like that, though, I will.

I also do wanna mention dat Macy. The all mighty Mrs. Chet! It was good scene between Macy and the young Anna, but oh damn does Macy need to conceal dat depression. Luckily she saw how she hurt Anna and instantly felt bad. I loved the way you put the "Sometimes we just wanna hurt the people we love, and we're not really sure why" line, because it can be true.

But man, your writing was amazing here to. Like, amazing. It's been awhile since I read the last ALRTF issue (34 or 25...im not sure), but damn you really grew. The writing here was phenomenal, and as I mentioned way above, it got me so hooked that I didn't want to stop reading. I applaud you, man. Great job.

Overral this was one of the best introduction issues on the wiki. We got so much development, hella plot and pacing (forrealz we got a whole story here where most pilot issues don't really move the plot along, or at least a plot this big that already drove the story foward). Great job man. I'm so hyped for the next one, which shld be out by Half Life 3!!!!!