Talk:Dead Awakened/Episode 2 (old)/@comment-1107423-20131209164951

I really find the set-up for James' backstory quite interesting. I'm intrigued to see where you go with that storyline, but otherwise I didn't find Blair or the rest of that storyline too interesting. I found the set-up there, with James taking Blair out for lunch similar to what happened in the first episode with Kenberg offering the same sort of deal to Ramillo, but replace lunch with nightclub. It just seemed like a similar set-up and I felt like maybe we were running on empty here.

However, you completely brought me back in with the community college cast. I love Neya and Yamsin already. Adel and Bruno have good starts too, I'm curious to see where this goes. Why was Adel brought in as their sub? Was the original teacher on 'leave' because she's... sick? We all know where sickness leads to in undead stories... I'm very excited to see what's next, KP!