Talk:Life Will End/Chapter 2/@comment-23785492-20131224005721

Damn, this was defiantly a step up from last chapter. The first scenes was very tense, poor Zach but I'm glad that the situation seems to be resolved for now. Except for the fact Jeff seems like a real asshole but I guess he's trying to protect the mute woman. By the way nice idea there you don't see many mute people in stories, or I don't anyway. :S

Now that supply run, I liked even more. That flashback for Mick was greatly put and it was a perfect place to put it. I'm going be honest and say I was surprised that he actually tried to rescue Melanie, part of me thought because of that flashback he was going to leave her but nice going making me think one thing was going to happen and then actually do another thing.

Still though I'm worried for Melanie, the way they had to cut her leg off with a dirty saw and didn't have any proper medical supplies or anything around, she's probably going to die but you might now kill her. :S

Again poor Zack feeling himself to be useless, I can defiantly see where he is coming from and that Jeff guy isn't helping at all, if he's going to keep being an ass to the group but as I said above, I suppose he's doing it to protect that mute woman.