Talk:A Long Road to Fortune/Issue 34/@comment-26217707-20140306221854

Took me forever to comment cuz I'm the worst kind of fgt.

Well anyway, you already know I thought this issue was amazing. Writing was top notch (when isn't it, tho?) and you made me feel hella emotions, especially in that very graphic description of Eva. Of course, it's very disturbing when things are described with detail like that but I think the gore was justified qnd used to good effect. If you didnt describe Eva's death so bluntly like that I honestly dont think the issue would have the same effect. As you said, thats what Mario saw.

Marios scenes with Jose and Sandra were great too. Got some Jose CD as well as some great moments regarding he and Mario's friendship, which I cant wait to see more of. Also a little hinting (winkwink) regarding Mario and Sandras future, but on a platonic level, they work, too, and his reveal to her was very heartbreaking. Overall, a much needed focus on Mario and what of your highlight issues PBR. As you know, Mario's now one of my favorites. :)

(Excuse any typos, wrote this on my phone)