Talk:Safe House/Prologue/@comment-26217707-20150307221921

Hey sabby, so I started Safe House! Short prologue so this comment won't be long but from what I can tell your writing is great dude, it's really crisp and engaging. Your dialogue is spot on too. Both great indicators for the rest of the series. Interesting how you started with two characters disconnected from the plot. They're not going to appear again, but they still got a bit of development to make them seem at least a little human rather than just random extras, which was a nice touch. Anyway, good start, I'm off to read some more