Talk:Apocalypse Life/Issue 1/@comment-5793555-20130328055052

I liked it. While reading it, you just want to know what happens next. You can't read this and stop mid-way. It'll drive you crazy if you do. =P It just wasn't the usual story, evne though it wasn't too action packed, it had the same, jittery, anxious effect. And the thing at the end about the vibrating just being the low battery is amazing. That is one of those things that helps make a story great, it just builds it up and makes the reader walk away feeling good and enjoying what they just wrote. My only note is that at parts it was confusing, such with the gaps in the phone call and I didn't know that's what they were until later, but I think that that was part of this chapter, and it wasn't too bad, it kind of fit in there, like it belonged. =)