Talk:Writing Contest 2/Maxwestt/@comment-8483090-20141108204629/@comment-6884918-20141109021940

Yoyoyo Thanks fo the comment :D

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The reason for the ending, aside from rushing, is that I thought about the contest itself, and thought about a day in the life of ***. I liked to view this as a day, not thé day, in his life in the apocalypse. If I understand Giacomo a bit, he wouldn't seem like a person doing something out of his boundaries. But yes, I think it is extremely legitimate critizism.

Again, thanks :D