Talk:Beside The Dying Fire/Issue 2/@comment-7590811-20130629105951

I prefered the first issue to this. The only characters that I can remember are Karen, Logan, Ken and Sohti. You've already got them leaving there safe haven in issue 2. I quite liked the Walmart part :-). I only remember Karen because it is Ken's girlfriend and Logan cause he was a main character in this issue. But you really need to slow down and develop some characters more like the new comers or his sister or even Karen istead of her just being a emotional tie to Ken.