User blog:PBR Sharpshoot/A Long Road to Fortune: Questions for the readers

Ok, so after three long months, volume 2 of A Long Road to Fortune is finally done. Now I have some questions for those of you who have read it:

1. What do you think of the story so far?

2. What areas of the story do you think need work?

3. Favorite character? (May be too soon, but I would still love some input).

4. Any other comments about the story?

5. What would you like to see explored in future flashbacks?

That is all. Thanks in advance!