Talk:Anguish & Desire/Chapter Six/@comment-23785492-20170603210530

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Ok waddup its yo boi here with another comment, idk what else to put here anymore lmao so imma just put this exact message in all my comments from now on.

Alright so the way you are teasing it makes it really look like my theory of another group is at least kinda true? I wonder if that's going to be the sequel, they're side of the story and the sword persion Ken mentioned is the protag. :O IDK how you'd do it but do it!!

"and, uh, am I forgetting someone?” This is literally me, Tomori is now the most relatable, while I'm getting a better, I still have to look at the list I put together and be like "okay who did I forget cause I know there is one"

Also now I feel bad, I haven't really thought much about Tani and friendships so rip, she's probably dead soon and I'm going to feel bad for the rest of Anguish.

Damnit Fitz, I knew it. Being all happy and reading them dancing, I knew you were going to leave it like this and now I don't want to read the next one but fml I'm going to anyway cause I love getting my heart broken while trying to be a nice friend and read a friend's story.

As with all the chapters so far though, I loved it. It's sad though because every time we get scenes where people are happy, no mentions are made between them about bad things, it is easy to forget the true story behind them all being together, it's easy to forget someone is going to kill someone else and I even forget that MonoMech is the bad guy (or is he? I'm still keeping true to my theory about him putting kids in this situation to test them and then they fail the test by murdering each other) and that just shows good writing.

I don't know how you feel about the amount you write each chapter but honestly you don't need anymore. You make me feel all different emotions and honestly considering you're writing through the POV of a single person, that's really impressive for me. It takes good writing to have someone care about all characters when you write through just one.

Speaking about the characters, Tomori and Satoshi are growing on me a lot, I get vibes across like they're going to be the two pair that survive through up to the end but aren't necessarily focused on like Nakata for example, kinda like R2-D2 and C-3PO but IDK, maybe I'm wrong or describing it wrong. Tani I also do like and I feel guilty for not showing her much, like I thought she was cool since beginning but I feel guilty for not thinking more about her. Other than that, no real changes, they are all my beloved children, even Obi-Wan though he's like the outcast of my children, I feel like he's going to be too evil but I try not to judge him.

Also since it looks like we're going to have our first death, I thought I'd do a ranking from who I like the most to who I like the least.

Ken, Kito, Yuka, Yosano, Nakata, Azama, Tani, Tomori, Satoshi, Saishi, Sasada, Nakamoto, Mio, Shiomi, Yoichi, Obinata and then MonoMech is the most bae of them all would be the average ranking. IDK, it's a bit hard to rank them because I never really rank who I like, I just like? but a death is a special occasion so fuck me up Fitz.

So yeah, this chapter was nice and fun and happy but now I'm ready to be fucked up, next chapter is probably the end of Chie so RIP my feelings, can't wait to experience everything going wrong and everyone dieing, it's going to be so great hahaha. :D :D :D I'm going crazy. ;-;