Talk:Endangered/Issue 2 (Old)/@comment-Pops Capo-20150825041349

lol what is this? 2k words? LOL

Olympus Has Fallen isn't even that bad, there's hardly any blood in that movie. They should have watched Game of Thrones, that's more child friendly. And she's 15, grow some balls, woman!

And... dad? Hmm. I take it that Sarah doesn't really like Michael or even considers him her father. It should be interesting to see them ending up together after everything goes to hell.

I feel like you tried to portray James as the (almost) exact opposite of Michael. Reasonably stable family life, good job, more money, great car, always arrives on time. If that's what you tried to accomplish you did good here.

But... he's not perfect, we all need money. Well, good people do bad things to protect those they love, he does need the money after all.

I liked it, it's nowhere near as bad as you said you'd be, like I said before, it's hardly bad at all. Just some weird grammar here and there and some typos but that's it.

tl;dr this is good but you're still a fgt