Talk:A Long Road to Fortune/Issue 29/@comment-26217707-20131228095502

Well, God dayum. Another ALRTF I loved--not surprising. Very character-sparse, but I think it worked in the issue's favor this time around. I'm gonna start with poor Liza D: Alright, I get that Ashton is really determined to get to the prepa and shit, and it wouldn't be as bad if he didn't fuck Liza THE NIGHT BEFORE LEAVING. Leading her on like that, HAVING SEX WITH HER, then breaking her heart by possibly getting himself killed is just not cool. I know you're a good guy Ashton, but that was a dick move I have to say. Mimi/Liza's anger is very justifiable. Speaking of that, I really loved Mimi's defense of Liza and her worry for her friend--really added some depth to there relationship (and I love Mimi's potty mouth ;D)

Then we go to Yuri/Frank...Hm, this relationship is extremely complicated as well. I think Yuri and Frank are both at fault here--Yuri for falsely leading Frank on when she doesn't reciprocate the feelings he has for her, and Frank for taking advantage of her in a time of need. Dang, man PBR, got my mind all up in different places here. Good stuff.

The stuff with Asston was interesting, with that weird grosero especially, and then that cliffhanger D: Like Fitz said, I'm guessing this is a new antag. but it'd be cool if I was wrong. But I don't know why else he'd be spying unless he was malicious...hm, great issue, good set up for some stuff that's bound to come later. Great job, PBR!