Talk:Dead Awakened/Episode 3 (old)/@comment-27376543-20140409010723

KP I am seriously in love with Dead Awakened. First off, I will just say that your writing is stellar. Your descriptions are spot-on, and I can picture the setting so easily in my mind, it's both literally and figuratively unreal. The club setting was simply awesome. I just love how you gave us informtaion on not only the club, but who attended the club--young but not too young, it gave me an idea on how the club looked like.

Okey, so your plot so far has been prettty badass. Ramillo, the new guy, is trying to fit in with Kenberg and his new colleagues, while at the same time, I'm getting a sense that he doesn't wanna let go of his past. I feel like the scene with him playing soccer with those kids has a lot more meaning than what you portrayed--at least, I think so. And lemme say, Ramillo is probably my favorite character thus far. I love how he's being portrayed so farm and I also love his co-workers. Kenberg and Darrius sticking out most to me. I don't know why, but Darrius's problem with his wife really got me so much more interested in his character. Kenberg--let's be honest he's your man! He's probably the most developed so far, and with good reason, that mother fucker is so fuckin' cool! I absolutely love him ;D. I can't wait to see both the plot and characters move forward as well.

And, probably the b-storylines of the episode, Alex & Janie, and Dimple's storyline. Being the father of Alex, I can honestly say I love her and how you portray her. The way she's constantly under stress, over working, trying to care for Janie was done so well. And, Janie is interesting, she doesn't talk much, like, at all...can't wait to see what that's about ;D. And Dimple I find so interesting. She's a recovering drug addict--but something tells me she isn't in the clear just yet. Albus and his criminal empire--I'm not sure if they're as suspicious as I make them out to be, but for some reason I'm totally expecting a war xD. I'm probably just over-looking dat tho.

But again, an amazing episode, KP! Your writing is amazing dood, and I hope that the next episode doesn't take 30 years <33