Talk:Epiphany/Book One/Chapter 1/@comment-5618526-20151026174633

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AYE John, so I got to read first episode of your new story cuz my teacher gone and i got the time, huiehueuheui.

Okay first off, I always remember your writing being really good, but hold crap dude your hard work is really shown through the ammount of detial you put in what seems like every line. This was really good, and I believe a good way to start Epiphany. Nothing to crazy happened, at least I think which isn't a bad, but we got to get our first taste of what is up with Grey, Dylan, and Gwen! I'm actually feeling Gwen the most tbh, mostly cuz she seems really cool, and has a very interesting view on the apocalyspe itself. and her and Declan huehue. Is it to early to start this ship? (I haven't read pops comment but he probably said the same.) Anyways it was very well man and will start Chapter 2 soon!!!