Talk:Writing Contest 1/Lee Everett/@comment-26217707-20130505234305

Description was a strong point in this one. Also liked the banter between Darly and Merle; it actually seemed like things they would say to each other! In some places, however, the dialogue was a little clunky. And to me, it seemed like a lot happened in such a short amount of time and it was a bit rushed. Still, a good entry, Lee!