Talk:A Long Road to Fortune/Issue 27/@comment-4105222-20131219102945

Whew, amazing read. I just don't know where to start so I'll give chronological order a go.

As always it's fun seeing some kind of celebratory scene... partly what I admire in Mexican culture is how you all party. But it's not about that, but this particular flashback of Francisco and Yuri. So I see Frank was never into Yuri at first... she was just any other girl to him. Somehow Francisco's growing as a favorite of mine as you expose him more. This flashback really just did the trick.

And what would Frank be without his Yuri? You make it more and more evident that being pretty in this place is difficult, seeing as you've got gang members on your heels. That whole fiasco with Yuridia and the gangers--quite harrowing if I do say so myself. You emphasized this well with the detail. I was just rooting for drunk Frank all throughout. This explains (to me) why she rejected Frank.

But that's not even the best part. I can really see this--this Yuri and Frank thing--going somewhere. Where exactly is up to you, PBR. And I'm looking forward to it. F Lizhton, I'ma keep my eyes out on Yuri and Frank.

There's just ... so much to go on about the other things, so I'll see what I can cover. And we go with Pepe vs. Mario. I never saw those two butting heads, but with the way you wrote it, it was just bound to happen. A soldiering soldier versus a troublesome hothead... yeah, I should've saw it coming.

But we must move on to this... the casualty of this issue. So that's why you spotlighted Mr. Aguila... ugh. He might've been minor, but his death is heavy. Because of all that build-up. How could you, man.

And we end with the trio. What mostly got me is that ending... I wouldn't have exposed to Ashton Mimi's addiction any other way.