Talk:A Long Road to Fortune/Issue 35/@comment-26217707-20140421223156

Not enough Curly, 0/10 would not read again.

Of course I am kidding ;D

Strong issue right here -- I read it yesterday, so I'll just go off what I remember. Since Curly has already been mentiones: what the fuck what a creepy mofo. The descriptions about his feelings regarding Fausto/Valdez/Ashton vs Mimi/Yvette (BACK THE FUCK OFF)/Liza were perfectly nuanced imo. It's like you really got inside his head -- there was no hinting that he thought his thoughts were wrong, or pervy, which makes sense. It's what a true fucking creep would think. Don't touch Yvette, I will find you Chuck/Curly and destroy your soul :)

Speaking of the crew, their little meeting was nice to read, and even with a scene where there are more characters than usual, you managed to bring out a lot of their traits as well. Mimi and Valdez tho omg they play off each other so well, their goofiness perfectly balances out the more normal/serious demeanors of the others without being comically ridiculous.

And that Frank/Yuri scene. All I gotta say is...ROCK THE BOAT ROCK THE BOAT CHAAAAAAANAAANGE POSITIONS (ty Aaliyah, r.i.p)

I really liked Pepe's tailing scene, it was a good bit of description and really highlighted why he's one of Mendoza's best, showing us rather than telling.

Then that ending D: Holy--Mendozie you're awesome and hardcore as all fuck. There's a reason I love him ;D I really can't wait to see more of Dozie tho, he really is one of my favorites.

Overall, strong issue with a good mix of dialogue/comedy/interactions/description/backstory. Melting pot of good story element right hurr

(Excuse the typos, on my phone)