Talk:The Ones Who Remain/Issue 8/@comment-25202500-20140216063141

Okay, finally. I'm caught up with The Ones Who Remain and I really love it. Good job with all the development and the handling of flashbacks, dream sequences and character interactions. I felt that this issue and issue 4 just hit me the most.

Firstly, I really couldn't believe the torture Mike had to go through and the fact that Cal, Jared, Adrianna and Nikki went out of their way to save Mike. I'm really curious to see who this Cameron woman is, she seems kinda sus. Davie and Jognson are a bunch of fucks, as are the other guards. What's really getting me interested, is this "Rebellion" and the dragon. I really can't wait to go forth and see what this rebeliion is going to do. Interesting to see Jared knowing about the Rebellion.

Okay, onto numero dos, I actually kinda liked that one-eyed prisoner but when he died, I was shocked an I just wanted to stop. Of course, I thought is fitz gonna kill one of my other faves and it seems I was proved right. You killed Freddy ;___; No seriously, please don't kill Caitlyn. I don't wanna see her go. Plus, TOWR NEEDS GURL POWAH! I really really really am shocked. I didn't even EXPECT Fred's death and I really c ant

Those Adrianna flashback sequences were amazing. I loved how we dug into her past with her li'l daughter and boyfriend and Rick. I found them all interesting and OMG SHE HAD A BABY <3333 Damn, poor Eliza didn't get a little sis. And it seems Adrianna and her bf didn't fuck for the girl. Well... Viva la Adrianna :D

And fucking Emma. I'm hating her guts even more and more, by allowing Echo to have Mike to go shed blood, tears and go through unbearable pain. That water thing, I forget the name of it but I recall it being some form of prison torture and I ca nt.

Great job fitz, and so far I rate TOWR the following:


 * Development -  9/10
 * Interaction-  4.3/5
 * Plot -  4.5/5
 * Total -  17.8/20 = 89%