User blog comment:Mr Volcy/Review my story - make suggestions!/@comment-26217707-20130323005155

Just finished Chapter 3: Daaaaaaaaaaaamn, you good. One of my favorite parts of your story is probably how you switch POV's. Your characters are awesome, too; you just introduced Keisha, but I like her already. And I'm looking forward to see if Daniel and Wilson butt heads in the future...