Talk:Dead In The Street/Chapter 5/@comment-4105222-20130511024812

Whew... what a jam-packed chapter you got here. A mix of funny, sensual, action, drama, and.... well, it was kind of like a movie, let's just say. Everything was well-written as usual. And I think you're one of the first people here who wrote really good sex scenes. Kids, man... they just can't do it the same as you. And I say that with pride. :P

And there's also a bunch of new characters in here. You managed to show this new warehouse group a tight-knit, detailed group in just one part. Good job on that. Now I fear more for what's going to happen with our little group. I can already tell there'll be a bunch of deaths.