Talk:Epiphany/Book One/Prologue/@comment-5910587-20150918061525/@comment-1107423-20151005151408

I was reallllyyy nervous that I didn't convey Tom's anxiety about the gate and the new arrival well enough, because -- tbh -- killing Darla and switching up the dynamic of the Tom/Kate relationship in this way was a last minute change. Darla was in the original plans, but I shifted things around for the sake of shaking up the Tom/Kate dynamic, so I was hoping that it would be prevalent in what I wrote but feared it wouldn't be so that's a relief to hear lol.

Thank you for your kind words, sorry it took 17 days to get back to you lol <3