Talk:Beyond The Dead/Issue 1/@comment-26217707-20130811052604

Yeah, I'm really loving your rewrite. I compared this version and the old version, and you've put a lot more detail into this one. You've gotten more in depth with Lionell's thoughts and other characters as well, and the writing in general is more sophisticated and just...really good. It's a testament to how you've grown as a writer, and looking at this, I can't wait for the future of BTD.