Talk:Writing Contest 1/Headaches/@comment-4105222-20130524094932

Excellent. I enjoyed this particular read. I never really sympathized well with Allen's family, but after this... I feel like I missed so much of their characters.

This was amazing. I felt the pre-apocalypse drama you had going on, and I learned a little bit more about Donna and Allen and their kids. I say this because you wrote it really well. Details, vocab, the works. There're some errors here and there, but us writers are bound to make that.

The conclusion was a bit depressing... of course, you were just detailing their deaths. After the content I read before, I realize now how tragic their deaths really were.

Excellent piece of writing!