Talk:Premonitions/Entry 1/@comment-5910587-20160225003003

Heyo, I'm late af but I gave this a reread so I could give it a proper comment.

So Julius is gonna travel the world with Killher, i presume? SWEET, i need this spin off pronto, KP.

Anyways, this was a nice, quick read, and it was great to see Julius again during this AL hiatus :'( After reading and writing a bunch of zombie stories on this wiki for three years, the realism of this was a really nice change, and really well done. The dialogue was exceptional (duh), I especially liked Henry's little piece at the beginning. you've got a knack for bringing out personality through dialogue *envy intensifies*

Julius and Lynn were sufficiently adorable. They weren't cheesy or overly cutesy, all their interactions were simply realistic, I'm sure that's what you were going for. It was really enlightening seeing what Julius had to say about his parents, and bringing in someone for him to relate to was a nice touch. All in all, short and sweet. I'm looking forward to more of these, KP, it was a nice change of pace, dawg