Talk:The Dead World/Issue 3/@comment-24583095-20131228151609

I don't know what'chu mean by how issues aren't gettttting bettter ;D! Already, I could see less and less grammar mistakes and I'm only on issue 3! Not bhad. Not bhad at all ;D!

Now anyways that first scene was sweet and funny! And I love how you was able to form major character development with it! Especially when he thinks aobut that, I love the fact he takes it out on the people around him. Totally a military con of going to war!

One thing I hope you did, is have some flashbacks of him in Iraq doing whatever he has to do. I would love to be interested to read that :).

Now the last scene I was completely shocked, and I didn't see or expect it coming! That was very well-written as well. I liked how he begin to hallutionate, as you're doing a hella job writing a veteran. It sad he has to kill his undead wife, but now it even more sad when you think about his baby girl. Unfortunately she's probably dead to </3