Talk:Writing Contest 1/Rick123Axel/@comment-4105222-20130506003849

I really find this concept with Otis and Patricia really interesting... Otis, and his typical angry behavior, and Patricia, just trying to care for two people she formerly met as survivors. I somewhat felt her anxiety for Kayleigh and Harry's loss; that means you did pretty well showing that.

As well, you've gotten Otis and Patricia's personalities down pretty well, though I always saw Otis as this mostly silent dude. Still, this is a different situation, as he was with Patrica only.... his shyness must've had to do with all the other people in the farm. He came off a bit controlling of Patricia, which he really didn't show much in his comic appearance; but again, it might just have been his leadership complex kicking again.

Nonetheless, a good job with this entry.