Talk:Dead Frontier/Issue 23/@comment-1107423-20130425005510

The opening conversation between Cole and Finn was very well-written. It felt very natural, I loved the little touch with Finn confusing Micah's name as "Mike". It just felt so human, those little moments can do wonders for a scene, as if it were an actual conversation.

Overall, a shorter issue but I liked it for what it was. Quite a few tiny character moments here, and I love how Billie is still affected by what she did with Roger. It's something no one should easily be able to handle, so I think it's great that you're handling her emotions accordingly.