Talk:Anguish & Desire/Chapter Eight/@comment-23785492-20170607000425

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Okay waddup its yo boi with the next comment of today and prepared to be heartbroken even more cause ur a hoe lets go!

I forgot to say this last chapter but people got stop smiling and thumbs-up'ng a woman is dead in her shower and these people are making jokes, this is why I can't trust any of them, they all be crazy.

I left a single comment throughout this chapter reading lmao I'm sorry this one is going to probably be another short comment but omg was this chapter too good, for the most part I was just glued to this page and kept on reading and reading which is not a typical thing for me (don't take offense to that by the way, I'm easily preoccupied so even if I love doing the thing I'm doing I could lose my attention to it for a while).

BUT we have reached the end of the reading and its time for the comment and the first thing I want to say was damnit. As I said on facebook, I knew Tani committed a murder throughout the story but I couldn't remember when she had done it and who she killed and I was hoping that I was wrong in her killing Chie and that it would be someone else so I'm left to guess who she is going to kill later but alas my hopes were in vain. Nothing against you or your writing though, just me being an idiot and reading spoilers lmao.

Anyway, this chapter was pretty amazing, I'm surprised that the trial didn't happen fully in this chapter since I thought it would but the way this chapter ended and is a cliffhanger for the next one is fine anyway, it s not like I have to wait several months for you to release the next one like you do me. :P

The trial itself I wasn't really sure how was going to go down but it was fun how it did, they're all little crime investigators in the making. Sad that they will all die horrible deaths so they won't get the chance though. ;)

Also two main notes on the characters.

1. I'm not sure but I've finally kinda locked it in my head on who is who when their name pops up except for the two similiar names who I always forget but screw them OR my brain has just accepted I'm never going to properly remember and it just pretends it does lol.

2. I think I've commented before but in these recent chapters you have done a good job at making everyone get some kind of focus each chapter (at least I think?) especially in moments like the trial here and it both makes me happy for you and jealous because I try to do the same thing in Evolution but half the time they're just in the background, I can't blame myself though I have 50 plus characters so I at least try, enough about me though, back to Anguish.

This trial and last chapter has given some good insight to who each of them are (at least whom they appear to be) as anybody can appear to be happy as they have in the chaptes so far but a situation like this brings out the true feelings in people, for example Azama appears to be quite different from how she has been previously, even Ken asking what happened to her.

I'm still not really sure how to feel or comment on them but I'm starting to build up some opinions on them all and with the next chapter being the last of this act, I will save my opinions there so I can hopefully get some big opinions on them overall, like a paragraph each or something but we'll see, probably not and I'm pumping it up for the tiniest comment ever!